She’s selling her virginity. He’s been secretly obsessed with her for years. They’ve only got one night together, better make it count.
She’s the last virgin on earth, at least that’s what it feels like to Kyle. Now she’s auctioning her virginity online in order to pay for medical school and give money to charity. She has no idea what she’s getting herself into, but she’s committed, and now there’s no turning back.
Caspian has been secretly obsessed with Kyle since the day they met years ago. He’s kept tabs on her for all of these years, and when he sees she’s auctioning her virginity, he knows there’s no way he’s going to let anyone else touch her. Ever.
The rules state that he gets one night with her, but rules are made to be broken.
But maybe that’s just me.
I’m also a wife and mom, and dutiful member of the Parent’s Association. Shh, don’t tell.
Jessa Fox is my pseudonym, because no one knows about all of the kinky stories and characters I love to create. They would never imagine all of the dirty thoughts running through my mind.
I hope you enjoy my stories as much as I love writing them. If you’re looking for a quick smutty treat, you came to the right place.
This was a short quick read that was neither spectacular or terrible. I honestly feel blasé about the whole affair. There was a lot of build up and development before the couple actual did the deed. It grew boring quickly and I found myself skipping over passages because they couldn’t hold my interest.
I also didn’t like either of the characters. Caspian’s obsession with Kyle is nothing less than creepy that his trying to pampering her just comes off as disturbing. Kyle is no better. She comes off as the bland cookie cutter good girl sacrificing herself to do good in the world. I didn’t particularly care about her sob story, nor did it touch me. Despite everything, she felt like she had the personality of a cardboard box. I genuinely feel bad saying that because you can feel the effort the author put into developing both the characters and the story. Unfortunately, it just wasn’t for me.
The upside is, that if you can get past the tedious build-up, the erotic scenes are pretty spicy. Even though I didn’t care about the story, the erotic scenes made it worth the effort.
Overall, the novella was good. Just because the story didn’t work for me doesn’t mean it won’t for you. Jessa Fox is a great writer. She knows how to create characters and develop a plotline to accompany her raw erotica. I cannot fault her just because the storyline and characters were not to my tastes.